tomorrow when the war began daunte and jaden's story

WRITING - Chris fell asleep on sentry duty. Rewrite an ending to this event where the teenagers are found by the invaders. Whose point of view are you writing from? What happens? How do they react/feel?





this is just a draft and not a proper story so that's why the punctuation is not that good 

Jaden's side


Chapter One


Me and my friends found these kids just sleeping in the open like it was 2 weeks ago and we thought why not go over and say hello to them and offer them some tea and cookies like we do with everyone else, so we start to go over there then we see some people running over there to take their stuff and worse. Then they all wake up and grab guns and run away from us because the people trying to take their stuff and we chase and kill the raiders to help the kids and take them back to the campsites with everyone else. But once we killed the raiders the kids were nowhere to be seen. A bit later we founded the kids then we looked away from the group to get the tea and cookies out and they had ……..

daunte's side
Chapter two


tried to escape by shooting at us so we kinda shot back they had bolt action rifles and we had fully automatic rifles so it was an unfair fight, to begin with, we stop shooting at them after we had hit one of them by what looked like the back of the head. 

when they saw that they started to charge at us screaming a rather rude word and then we started to fire again I loaded a whole mag into a male and he still kept coming at us and once we saw him hit the ground the bandits began to scream homer and they ran for a truck and what seemed to be a woman standing on the back of a truck with a rocket launcher and with a blink of an eye my whole squad had been taken out I manage to get a few shots on the woman and she crumbled under the weight of the rocket launcher and hit the ground with a thud at that moment I realised I was the last one left out of my squad able to fight then I was grabbed by the back of my neck and I was being strangled so I turned and hit a girl and she screamed with pain and then I felt an ear piercing sound and at that moment i had just realised I had been shot.i fell to the ground on my knees in pain I managed to look at my attacker and I thought this is it im going to die from a teenager and then I heard another bang and the boy hit the ground and fell silite and didn't move then I look from where the gunshot came from my team mate we both were on the ground but he was less ingerd than me. he got up and helped me up to my feet and he said that the others ran away and he said that the other patrol will take care of them he said that they dropped their guns and ran after we killed that girl on the truck he looked over to where the girl was on the ground crying he told me what happened to her I said that I hit here in the face and he said we will take her back and integrate her and offer her tea and cookies and he said and for you need a doctor I will call for backup he said.and after a few minutes later a truck arrived to pick up my squad well what was left of my squad.for me though I was airlifted to the hospital.