I think a metaphors is a tree strong and natural
And something you feel
a simile use words like “as” and “like”
sensory language
It was a cold winter morning the sun was gleaming down on the cold frozen grass my nose was sniffling i had just gotten out of the drive way to get to school when i got a scent of pine trees and i was searching around to see were the scent was coming from when all a sudden there was a sound that caught my attention it was a tree burning it was on fire i could swear there was a man running away but i wasn't paying attention to him as he ran off.it was almost as if he had done it on purpose i sensed that it wasn't all it seemed to be
good job there daunte i would suggest that you could use more punctuation but overall it was very interesting story to read.
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DeleteDaunte, I really like your sensory language paragraph it had a lot of info of your five senses. I believe you could you add more to your simile words but overall great job my friend and have a good day
ReplyDeleteBeautiful sensory language paragraph, Daunte. I can picture the scene very clearly. You are correct in your own comment to yourself that some punctuation would make the paragraph even better. Perhaps you could update?
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